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The table chart potray the data about consumption of soft and hard drink per liter by citizens of disimmilar nations.

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The table chart potray the data about consumption of soft and hard drink per liter by citizens of disimmilar nations. Overall, It is evident from the figures, higher consumption of beer in Ireland and Germany. However, the least is in Finland. Fruit juice consumption In Canada and The USA are comparatively higher among other nations whereas, New Zealand consumes least per person liter. To begin, with beer consumption Ireland and Germany consume 155 and 119 liter per person respectively. 106 liter is in Austria. However Belgium and Denmark level off with 98 liter. United Kingdom consume just 1 liter below than Denmark. Australia consumes 4 liter greater than United State 85 liter. Netherland consumes 5 liter less than United State. However Finland consume 79 liter per person. Movingfurther, to fruit juice, Canada consumption per liter is 52. 6 which are higher as compare to other nations. However, the second and third consumer are United State and Germany with 47. 8 and 38. 6 liter per person. Austria, Sweden and Australia are at 37. 3, 35. 5 and 34. 4 per person liter. United Kingdom is at 29. 3 and Netherland at 28 per person liter. However New Zealand is at 24. 8 liter which is the least consumption.
The table chart
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potray
the data about
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consumption
of soft and
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hard
drink per liter by citizens of
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disimmilar
nations.

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, It is evident from the figures, higher
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consumption
of beer in Ireland and Germany.
However
, the least is in Finland. Fruit juice
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consumption
In Canada and The USA are
comparatively
higher among other nations whereas, New Zealand
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consumes
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least
per
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person
liter.

To
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begin
, with beer
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consumption
Ireland and Germany
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155 and 119 liter per
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person
respectively
. 106 liter is in Austria.
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However
Belgium and Denmark level off with 98 liter.
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United
Kingdom
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consume
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just
1 liter below than Denmark. Australia
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consumes
4 liter greater than
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United
State 85 liter.
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Netherland
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consumes
5 liter less than
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United
State.
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Finland
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79 liter per person.

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, to fruit juice, Canada
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per liter is 52. 6 which are higher
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compare to other nations.
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, the second and third consumer are
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State and Germany with 47. 8 and 38. 6 liter per
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person
. Austria, Sweden and Australia are at 37. 3, 35. 5 and 34. 4 per
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liter.
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Kingdom is at 29. 3 and
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Netherland
at 28 per
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liter.
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New Zealand is at 24. 8 liter which is the least
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