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The given pie chart depicts the number of candidates who appeared for interview and those who were finally selected.

The given pie chart depicts the number of candidates who appeared for interview and those who were finally selected. j9lm1
The rendered pie chart illustrate the information about number of applicants appeared for interview and another one show percentage of selected people from interview. Overall, it is apparently seen that majority of applicants were from science field and most of people were also selected from this field. To begin with, the number of candidates who appeared for interview in agriculture field was half of applicants who who appeared for science which was 28%, respectively. Whereas number of candidates for other and management field was same which was about 12%. The number of applicants for both engineering and commerce were almost same. For engineering it was 16% whereas, 18% for commerce. Furthermore, In commerece field 16% of candidates were selected however, for science field these number was doubled. In agriculture field 7% of people were chosen and its doubled of individuals were opted for other field. In engineering field 11% of applicants were selected however its double of people were chosen from management field.
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IELTS academic The given pie chart depicts the number of candidates who appeared for interview and those who were finally selected.

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