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The diagram below show the sources of energy production in four countries from 2003 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compromise where relevant

The diagram below show the sources of energy production in four countries from 2003 to 2008. APVeL
The assigned tabular chart enumerates crucial information about the energy which generate in four nations between 2003 and 2008. Overall, it is lucid that the maximum power emit by nuclear in NewZealand whereas fossil fuel and nuclear produced least energy in Morocco and Vietnam. As regards Nuclear, it accounting to 79% in NewZealand then it experienced a decline of 26% in Mexico. As far as fossil fuel was concerned, after plummeted 12% in Mexico, it showed upsurge to 19% in NewZealand. Probing further, the ratio of hydro was noticed 2% and 35% in NewZealand and Mexico respectively. Regarding hydro, it comparised of 30% in Morocco, it showed inclining of 19% in Vietnam. In contrast, the biggest slice of nuclear and fossil fuel, accounted for 121% in Morocco and Vietnam collectively.
The assigned tabular chart enumerates crucial information about the energy which generate in four nations between 2003 and 2008.

Overall
, it is lucid that the maximum power emit by nuclear in
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NewZealand
whereas fossil fuel and nuclear produced
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least
energy in Morocco and Vietnam.

As regards Nuclear,
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it accounting
to 79% in
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NewZealand
then it experienced a decline of 26% in Mexico. As far as fossil fuel
was concerned
, after plummeted 12% in Mexico, it
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showed
upsurge to 19% in
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NewZealand
. Probing
further
, the ratio of hydro
was noticed
2% and 35% in
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NewZealand
and Mexico
respectively
.

Regarding hydro, it
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comparised
of 30% in Morocco, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
inclining of 19% in Vietnam.
In contrast
, the biggest slice of nuclear and fossil fuel, accounted for 121% in Morocco and Vietnam
collectively
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below show the sources of energy production in four countries from 2003 to 2008.

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