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The diagrams show how a wave-energy machine produces electricity and where it is located.

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The diagrams show how a wave-energy machine produces electricity and where it is located. As you can see, wave will move directly toward the machine, in to the chamber. It raises the water levels inside the chamber and causes the air to flow up. There are also air flows from the upward side in. As the air flow, it passes the turbine and makes it run, it's generate electricity. In the second diagram, there are two machines located in a low and high installation cost. The high instalation costs face the lager wave than the low installation, as it placed futher to the cost. Therefore more airs flow through the turbine, and produces higher output. On the other hand, the low installation costs, as placed closer to the land, faces smaller waves, so less airs flow across the engine. Therefore when compared to the machine on the higher installation cost, it provides a lower output.
The diagrams
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how a wave-energy
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machine
produces electricity and where it
is located
.

As you can
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see
, wave will
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move
directly
toward the
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machine
, in to the chamber. It raises the water levels inside the chamber and causes the
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air
to
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flow
up. There are
also
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air
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flows
from the upward side in. As the
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air
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flow
, it passes the turbine and
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makes
it run, it's generate electricity.

In the second diagram, there are two
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machines
located in a low and high installation
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cost
. The high
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instalation
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costs
face the lager wave than the low installation, as it placed
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futher
to the
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cost
.
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Therefore
more airs
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flow
through the turbine, and produces higher output.
On the other hand
, the low installation
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costs
, as placed closer to the land, faces smaller waves,
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so
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less
airs
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flow
across the engine.
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Therefore
when compared to the
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machine
on the higher installation
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cost
, it provides a lower output.
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IELTS academic The diagrams show how a wave-energy machine produces electricity and where it is located.

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6.0
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