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The graph shows the information about internet usage in the USA, Canada and Mexico from 1999 to 2009.

The graph shows the information about internet usage in the USA, Canada and Mexico from 1999 to 2009. bQwlP
The line graph compares the USA, Canada and Mexico in terms of the information about Internet usage and how these changed from 1999 to 2009. Overall, the information about Internet usage of three nations increased over the period of 10 years. The Internet usage of Canada was higher than that of the USA and Mexico. In the year 1999, the figure for the USA was about 20%. The proportion of users in Canada and Mexico accessing the Internet were lower, at about 5 and 10% respectively. In 2005, Internet usage in both Canada and USA increased rapidly by about 75%, by contrast, the figure for Mexico reached just approximately 30%. By 2009, the percentage of Internet users in Canada was the highest, at around 100% compared to about 80% of Americans and only 40% of Mexicans.
The line graph compares the USA, Canada and Mexico in terms of the information about Internet
usage
and how these
changed
from 1999 to 2009.

Overall
, the information about Internet
usage
of three nations increased over the period of 10 years. The Internet
usage
of Canada was higher than that of the USA and Mexico.

In the year 1999, the figure for the USA was about 20%. The proportion of users in Canada and Mexico accessing the Internet
were
lower, at about 5 and 10%
respectively
.

In 2005, Internet
usage
in both Canada and USA increased
rapidly
by about 75%, by contrast, the figure for Mexico reached
just
approximately 30%.

By 2009, the percentage of Internet users in Canada was the highest, at around 100% compared to about 80% of Americans and
only
40% of Mexicans.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the information about internet usage in the USA, Canada and Mexico from 1999 to 2009.

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