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The table below shows causes of injuries in Australia for teenagers and the general population

The table below shows causes of injuries in Australia for teenagers and the general population 7WNwY

The table depicts injuries caused by different reasons for Australian teenagers and the general population. The statistics are categorized into gender with age ranging from thirteen to nineteen and the rates of injuries caused by ten certain reasons. It is blatant that male teenagers encounter situations that put them through physical pain much more than female teenagers do. The highest rates for the two sexes are 779 cases in total transport accidents and 349 cases in complication of medical care for boys and girls respectively. As for the total of both female and male, total transport accidents is what cause the most injuries. Additionally, the lowest rates for male and female teenagers are injuries made by pedestrian for boys and physical pain created by exposure to heat, smoke, fire for girls. While the number of damage for teenagers stays high, the figure for total population are slightly lower. However, the highest rate for total population is 1431 cases in complication of medical care which create a big gap from the highest rate of female teenagers. Thus, pedestrian create the lowest damage to the total population. In conclusion, Australian citizens, especially teenagers can be hurted physically by different causes and the number stays surprisingly high.

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