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The table chart illustrates the number of sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district for an October week( from 7th -13th).

The table chart illustrates the number of sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district for an October week( from 7th -13th). AoD3
The table chart illustrates the number of sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district for an October week( from 7th -13th). Overall, the dinner sales are more as compare to the lunch sales at eating house and people prefers to eat out on weekdays instead of weekends. With the amount to lunch sales, the restaurant earns up to $2300 to $2500 on weekdays. Whereas there is sharp decline during weekends, sale lunch of approximate range from $1900 to $1500. Sunday has the lowest sales($1550) among all the days of the week. People prefer to go to the restaurant during dinner time. Restaurant sales are 50% during evenings as compare to lunch timings. Friday generates the highest dinner sales this week, that is $4350, while other days generate income between $2400 to $3600. Sunday is also accounted here for the generation of the lowest sales(only $2450) for dinner time this week.
The table chart illustrates the number of
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in a downtown business district for an October week
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at eating
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With the amount to lunch
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sales
, the
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earns up to $2300 to $2500 on weekdays. Whereas there is sharp decline during weekends,
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sale
lunch of approximate range from $1900 to $1500. Sunday has the lowest
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sales($1550)
among all the days of the week.

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during
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are 50% during evenings as compare to lunch timings. Friday generates the highest
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dinner
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sales
this week,
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IELTS academic The table chart illustrates the number of sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district for an October week( from 7th -13th).

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