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The table chart illustrate that the different foods and beverages sold by a office coffee shop from morning to evening in different timings.

The table chart illustrate that the different foods and beverages sold by a office coffee shop from morning to evening in different timings. Y6WQ
The table chart illustrate that the different foods and beverages sold by a office coffee shop from morning to evening in different timings. Overall it evident that the most of the people love to drink coffee than tea. In morning 7. 30 to 10. 30 had the busy time in the restaurant all three items highly sold in this time exception sandwiches, whereas in the evening 2. 30 to 5. 30 was the least busy time in the coffee shop. In the morning 7. 30 to 10. 30 coffee and pastries are the most popular item. 265 coffee and 275 pastries are sold out from out of total 700 following 110 tea and 50 sandwiches sold at this time, however after 4 hours sandwiches selling rate was goes to peak level that was 50 to 200, and also other three food items are coffee, tea and pastries become 185, 50 and 95 respectively. From the evening 2. 30 to 5. 30 very few members are visit the coffee shop that was only 370 compared than morning time, coffee and pastries are the good combo, was sold almost equal number in this time that was around 150 similarly sandwich and tea also, instead of 200 coffee lovers in the evening 5, 30 to 7. 30 out of total 465 customers and tea, pastries and sandwiches are sold out below 150 level at this time.
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shop from
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to evening in
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different
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evident that the most of the
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people
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than
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. In
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morning
7. 30 to 10. 30 had the busy
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in the restaurant all three items
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exception sandwiches, whereas in the evening 2.
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to 5.
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was the least busy
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in the
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shop. In the
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7. 30 to 10. 30
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and
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pastries
are the most popular item. 265
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and 275
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are sold
out from out of total 700 following 110
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and 50 sandwiches sold at this
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after 4 hours sandwiches selling rate was goes to peak level that was 50 to 200, and
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other three food items are
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,
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and
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pastries
become 185, 50 and 95
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. From the evening 2. 30 to 5. 30
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few members are visit the
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,
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are the
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that was around 150
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sandwich and
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also
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lovers in the evening 5, 30 to 7.
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30
out of total 465 customers and
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,
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and sandwiches
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time
.
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IELTS academic The table chart illustrate that the different foods and beverages sold by a office coffee shop from morning to evening in different timings.

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