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overall it is clearly seen that maximum amount of air consumption increased countries Ireland Germany and Austria on the other hand Canada and the United States highest amount consume fruit juice per person per here. according to the first table Island people drink the beer in highest amount 145 letter for a person in a year the next two countries consume the bear the maximum amount it accounted for above 100 litre for person for here while UK Belgium and Denmark people take 97228 each here it is an of Australia America and needle and conduction of their 18985 and 18 respectively film and complete take in a lowest amount of 2019 per person for here. looking into the second table Canadian drink use per person for your in a year the maximum amount of 52. 6 you are so take 42. 8 l here for a while next five nations in list consumer use 39 230 litre per person per yah beside you can either land and New Zealand people drink reducer less than half the amount of Canada it counted from 29924 respectively % annually
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overall
it is
clearly
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seen
that maximum
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of air consumption increased countries Ireland Germany and Austria
on the other hand
Canada and the United States
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highest
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amount
consume fruit juice per
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person
per here.
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according
to the
first
table Island
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people
drink the beer in
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highest
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amount
145
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for a
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person
in a year the
next
two countries consume the bear the maximum
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amount
it accounted for above 100
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for
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person
for here while UK Belgium and Denmark
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people
take 97228 each here it is an of Australia America and needle and conduction of their 18985 and 18
respectively
film and complete take in
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a
lowest
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amount
of 2019 per
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person
for here.
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looking
into the second table Canadian drink
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use
per
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person
for your in a year the maximum
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amount
of 52. 6 you are
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so
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take
42. 8 l here for a while
next
five nations in list consumer
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use
39 230
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per
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per
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yah
beside you can either land and New Zealand
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drink reducer less than half the
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of Canada it counted from 29924
respectively
%
annually

IELTS academic the table chart illustrates the information pertaining to the comparison between fruit juice and becomes option per person per your indistinct Nations.

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