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The charts give information about Yemen and Italy age group poulation in 2000 and in 2050

The charts give information about Yemen and Italy age group poulation in 2000 and in 2050 1kBeA
The pie charts illustrate the population’s proportion in 3 age groups of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and this figure for 2050. Overall, while the elderly population is predicted to remain the lowest percentage, the 15-59 years is guessed to place in the first throughout the period. 50, 1% was the inhabitants’ amount of 0-14 years old in 2000 which was the maximum of Yemen community prior to 15-59 years old at 46, 3%. in 2050, it is predicted that there would be a replacement in the order each age bracket’s amount between the young falling to 37% and 15-59 years rising by 11%. However, the older people would stay the same at the lowest despite a rise from 3, 6% to 5, 7% Conversely, the majority Italians was occupied by 15-59 years old at 61, 6 % being predict to decrease significantly by 15. 4% in 2050. A similar trend was seen in the figure for the Italians young having the worst performance during the period and forecasting to decline slightly from 14, 3% (2000) to 11, 5% (2050). Due to that, it is guessed that the Italian old people population will grow from 24, 1 % to 42, 3% in 2050 to be the highest age group’s proportion.
The pie charts illustrate the population’s proportion in 3 age groups of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and this figure for 2050.
Overall
, while the elderly population
is predicted
to remain the lowest percentage, the 15-59 years
is guessed
to place in the
first
throughout the period.

50, 1% was the inhabitants’ amount of 0-14 years
old
in 2000 which was the maximum of Yemen community prior to 15-59 years
old
at 46, 3%.
in
2050, it
is predicted
that there would be a replacement in the order each age bracket’s amount between the young falling to 37% and 15-59 years rising by 11%.
However
, the older
people
would stay the same at the lowest despite a rise from 3, 6% to 5, 7%

Conversely
, the majority Italians
was occupied
by 15-59 years
old
at 61, 6 % being
predict
to decrease
significantly
by 15. 4% in 2050. A similar trend was
seen
in the figure for the Italians young having the worst performance during the period and forecasting to decline
slightly
from 14, 3% (2000) to 11, 5% (2050). Due to that, it
is guessed
that the Italian
old
people
population will grow from 24, 1 % to 42, 3% in 2050 to be the highest age group’s proportion.
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