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The diagram shows the nitrogen cycle which is how the nitrogen created and then be used.

The diagram shows the nitrogen cycle which is how the nitrogen created and then be used. 7PNOb

The diagram shows the nitrogen cycle which is how the nitrogen created and then be used. First, the origin gascous nitrogen being absorbed by the plant and the lightings, then the nitrogen was fixed to create the ammonium. The ammonium after a while in the natural becomes nitrite. The nitrite after that becomes the nitrate, which was formed by the lighting through the process of fixation. The nitrates become food for the herbivore to absorb, the animal after that died and being decomposed. However the nitrates, which was formed by lightning passed, was denitrified and then become gascous nitrogen and the cycle countinues.

The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the nitrogen cycle which is how the nitrogen created and then be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
. First
, the origin Possible spelling mistake found.gaseous
gascous
 nitrogen being absorbed
 by the plant and the Possible spelling mistake found.lightingliftingsightingslightnings
lightings
, then the nitrogen was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 to create the ammonium. The ammonium after a while in the natural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcometurn intogrow intodevelop into
becomes
 nitrite. The nitrite after that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcometurn intogrow intodevelop into
becomes
 the nitrate, which was formed
 by the lighting through the process of fixation. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 nitrates You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcometurn intogrow intodevelop into
become
 food for the herbivore to absorb, the animal after that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
 and being decomposed
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 the nitrates, which was formed
 by lightning passed, was Possible spelling mistake found.gentrified
denitrified
 and then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcometurn intogrow intodevelop into
become
Possible spelling mistake found.gaseous
gascous
 nitrogen and the cycle Possible spelling mistake found.continues
countinues
. 