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The diagram shows the nitrogen cycle which is how the nitrogen created and then be used.

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The diagram shows the nitrogen cycle which is how the nitrogen created and then be used. First, the origin gascous nitrogen being absorbed by the plant and the lightings, then the nitrogen was fixed to create the ammonium. The ammonium after a while in the natural becomes nitrite. The nitrite after that becomes the nitrate, which was formed by the lighting through the process of fixation. The nitrates become food for the herbivore to absorb, the animal after that died and being decomposed. However the nitrates, which was formed by lightning passed, was denitrified and then become gascous nitrogen and the cycle countinues.
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the nitrogen cycle which is how the nitrogen created and then be
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nitrogen
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lightings
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fixed
to create the ammonium. The ammonium after a while in the natural
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nitrite. The nitrite after that
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the nitrate, which
was formed
by the lighting through the process of fixation.
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The
nitrates
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food for the herbivore to absorb, the animal after that
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died
and
being decomposed
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the nitrates, which
was formed
by lightning passed, was
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denitrified
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gascous
nitrogen and the cycle
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countinues
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the nitrogen cycle which is how the nitrogen created and then be used.

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