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The graph shows birth and death rates from 1901 to 2101. Summarize the information and contrast between it.

The graph shows birth and death rates from 1901 to 2101. 2Km8J

The given graph illustrates the birth and death changes in new zealand over a period of 100 years. The units are expressed with respect to thousands. Overall, it represents a spike increase in birth as well as death percentages in 2101 with contrast to 1901. However, the birth rate demonstrates a fluctuation by soaring in midway then, sinking back during the ending years. In contrast, death rates leapt upwards gradually and remained constant for 40 years. With reference to the number of birth rates, in the initial years it was 20, 000 and it further climbed to approximately 63, 000 in 1961, nevertheless declined to 42, 000 in 2101. As far as death toll is concerned, it was lower than births at 9, 000 in 1901 until 2041 when deaths rocketed tremendously rather than births for a period of 60 years. In addition, it depicts the sedentary lifestyle becoming a source for health deterioration consequently resulting in lower birth numbers from 2041 to 2101.

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, it represents a spike increase in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdeliverybeginningchildbirthcreation
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as well
 as death percentages in 2101 with contrast to 1901. However
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdeliverybeginningchildbirthcreation
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 rate demonstrates a fluctuation by soaring in midway then, sinking back during the ending years. In contrast
, death rates leapt upwards gradually
 and remained constant for 40 years. With reference to the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdeliverybeginningchildbirthcreation
birth
 rates, in the initial years it was 20, 000 and it further
 climbed to approximately 63, 000 in 1961, nevertheless
 declined to 42, 000 in 2101. As far as death toll is concerned
, it was lower than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdeliverybeginningchildbirthcreation
births
 at 9, 000 in 1901 until 2041 when deaths rocketed tremendously
rather
 than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdeliverybeginningchildbirthcreation
births
 for a period of 60 years. In addition
, it depicts the sedentary lifestyle becoming a source for health deterioration consequently
 resulting in lower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdeliverybeginningchildbirthcreation
birth
 numbers from 2041 to 2101. 