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The graph shows percentage of visitors in island city during 2010 to 2017 summerize main point and compare

The graph shows percentage of visitors in island city during 2010 to 2017 summerize main point and compare 86pjB

The graph illustrates information about the number of visitors visited a Caribbean Island in three different categories over the period of seven years. Overall, what stands out from graph is that there are two clear trends is visible. The number of visitors who stayed on cruise ships peaked slightly in 2010 and recovered in 2012. Then the figure increased steady year on year, it overtook visitors who stayed on island between 2015 and 2016. After that received to 2 million in 2017. This figure Shown an upward trend during this period. Regarding to the visitors stayed island, it reminded stable during 2010 - 2011, despite increasing in number of travelers to approximately 0. 75 million in 2011, the visitors increased significantly from around 0. 75 million in 2011 to 1. 5 million 2013. After that it remained stable until 2015. Then stayed dipped and recovered during 2015 - 2017. Although the number of visitors stayed on island were more than who stayed on cruise ships at the beginning of period, they were 0. 5 million more than who stayed on cruise ships at the end of the period and experienced a downward trend. There was a significant increase in total number of tourists between 2010 and 2015, it increased from 1 million to 2. 7 million and then experienced a stable trend until 2016. After that reached a peak of 3. 5 million at 2017. This figure experienced a same trend as visitors stayed on cruise ships except during two first years of period. In conclusion, the number of travelers visited Caribbean island fluctuate a lot. In the first years of period tourists were more interested in staying on island however at the end of period most of them were stayed on cruise ships.

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