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The table chart illustrates the information about the average weekly salary by occupation in 2018 in both genders. The data has calibrated in rollers.

The table chart illustrates the information about the average weekly salary by occupation in 2018 in both genders. The data has calibrated in rollers. PWX6E
Analyzing the data about males and females how much payment obtain by technicians job 1400 rollers by mens. whereas, the minerally decrease observed in women payment which was 900 dollars. However, males earned money by surviving workers nearly 1300 while, women obtain money from professionals in both genders 2000 and 1900 dollars respectively in 2018. Furthermore, administrative workers get discharge 1350 rollers than, there was a dramatic decline seen in administrative workers1000 rollers. Therefore, men earned money by manual labours 1100 rollers. Nevertheless there had been a dramatically fallen down noticed obtain money by women which were 850 dollars. To sum up, the highest money earned by professionals men's. While, opposite trend followed by the other workers.
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from professionals in both genders 2000 and 1900 dollars
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in 2018.
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workers1000
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by manual
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1100
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by women which were 850 dollars. To sum up, the highest
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earned by professionals
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IELTS academic The table chart illustrates the information about the average weekly salary by occupation in 2018 in both genders. The data has calibrated in rollers.

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