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the favourite subjects of 60 students in two school

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The bar chart compares the information about interesting subject of 60 students in school A and school B. It is clear that, the number of students in school A prefer Sports than other subjects, while the data for Craft/ Drawing in school B was the most liked subject. Notably, in school A, more than half students like Sports (around 36 students), compared to that of the second highest in Science (about 9 students) and the third highest in Social science (around 6 students). By contrast, the number of students like language, at 5 students, whilst the figure for Craft/Drawing is much lower, reaching 4 students. In school B, 25 students like craft and drawing, which is more than six times the student’s number of school A. Language is the second most preferred subject in school B, at 18 students. In addition, the quantity of students like Social science at 10 students, which is double the number of students of school A. Only two students from school B like science, whereas its data in school A at 9 students. The biggest change can be seen in the graph, the quantity of students choosing Sport in school B is lower than its statistic in school A, at 5 students.
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IELTS academic the favourite subjects of 60 students in two school

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207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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