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The line graph and bar chart below straight information and prediction regarding number of vehicles in million and amount of Co2 released by them into different country over a period of 30 years overall it can be seen from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted by cars

The line graph and bar chart below straight information and prediction regarding number of vehicles in million and amount of Co2 released by them into different country over a period of 30 years overall it can be seen from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted by cars NMW1W

The line graph and bar chart illustrate the information and prediction regarding number of vehicle in million and amount of Co2 released by them into different country over a period of 30 years overall it can be seen from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted by car the number of vehicles increase dramatically from 2000 to 20 million to 2010 at 35 million and it is likely to accelerate sharply to 62 million till 2030 in regard to amount of Co2 emitted

The line graph and bar chart illustrate the information and prediction regarding number of vehicle in Use "a million" or use a number before 'million'.a million
million
 and amount of Co2 released by them into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 country over a period of 30 years overall
 it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically
 and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted
 by car the number of vehicles increase dramatically
 from 2000 to 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 to 2010 at 35 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 and it is likely to accelerate sharply
 to 62 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 till 2030 in regard to amount of Co2 emitted

IELTS academic The line graph and bar chart below straight information and prediction regarding number of vehicles in million and amount of Co2 released by them into different country over a period of 30 years overall it can be seen from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted by cars

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American English

1 paragraphs

95 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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