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The line graph and bar chart below straight information and prediction regarding number of vehicles in million and amount of Co2 released by them into different country over a period of 30 years overall it can be seen from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted by cars

The line graph and bar chart below straight information and prediction regarding number of vehicles in million and amount of Co2 released by them into different country over a period of 30 years overall it can be seen from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted by cars NMW1W
The line graph and bar chart illustrate the information and prediction regarding number of vehicle in million and amount of Co2 released by them into different country over a period of 30 years overall it can be seen from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted by car the number of vehicles increase dramatically from 2000 to 20 million to 2010 at 35 million and it is likely to accelerate sharply to 62 million till 2030 in regard to amount of Co2 emitted
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and amount of Co2 released by them into
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from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase
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to 2010 at 35
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and it is likely to accelerate
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till 2030 in regard to amount of Co2 emitted
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IELTS academic The line graph and bar chart below straight information and prediction regarding number of vehicles in million and amount of Co2 released by them into different country over a period of 30 years overall it can be seen from line graph and bar graph that vehicle number will increase dramatically and the maximum amount of Co2 has been emitted by cars

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