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The table below shows the unemployed man and women spend their time in UK in 1982.

The table below shows the unemployed man and women spend their time in UK in 1982. MB0Le
The table illustrates that how the unemployed spend their time in UK in the year of 1982. The scale is in percentage. To begin with, unemployed men spent their time in the morning which was 19% on housework and women spent their time on housework was 49% which was more than men unemployed. Although, 20%men were interested in shopping while women spent more time than men which was 26%. In job hunting, men indicated more interest than women unemployed in the morning which was 22%. 10% women spent their time with friends and relatives which is 6% in men and 10% in women. Gardening activity was more attractive for a men which rate is about 14% and in women it is 2%. Men and women, these both gender gave simillar response to spent their most of time in T. V activity. Which rated is 4% for men and 2% of the women. But women indicate a bit undergo in total percentage. Moreover, men who spent their time on the housework in afternoon Which was 7% and in women, it was 21%. Furthermore, most of women spent their most of time in shopping which was about 17% compared with men which was less than 9%. After that, both gender are interested in job hunting activity which percentage was 12% of men and 13% of women. While, women spent their time to visiting friends or relatives which is 17% respectively which is compare with men who's rate was less than 6%. In gardening women not getting most of time on it but men almost spent time in gardening which is 13%. Further, men spent their time on reading in which rated was same, men likely to spent time in decorating which percentage is remain same in both schedule morning and afternoon. Men's total percentage has remained same in playing sport and drinking activity which is almost 4% and 3% Receptively. In the women unemployed, they spent their much time in decorating, walking and playing soort, these three activities rated remain same in both schedule. Although women in afternoon, they not spent time to staying in bed but in morning case, percentage increase with 8%. Overall, both gender were spending much of time on housework in afternoon and also they less likely to spend time on water.
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in UK in the year of 1982. The scale is in
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women
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was 49% which was more than
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men
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unemployed
. Although, 20%
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men
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which was 26%. In job hunting,
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in the
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which was 22%. 10%
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with friends and relatives which is 6% in
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. Gardening
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which rate is about 14% and in
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it is 2%.
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in T. V
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in decorating which
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on water.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the unemployed man and women spend their time in UK in 1982.

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