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The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. AP5lL
The given table illustrates how the estimated literacy rates by five regions (Africa, Americas, Asia, Europe, Oceania) and gender (male and female) between 2000 and 2004. Overall, what stands out from the table is that, Americas, Europe and Oceania had the highest literacy rate, although Asia and Africa had the lowest literacy rate, while World had 82. 2% literacy rate. Looking at the table, it can be clearly seen that the figure in Europe for both male and female were the highest literacy rate in the table, at 99. 2 % and 98. 5%. The proportions for males in Americas and Oceania were around 94%, whereas the number for female literacy rate in Americas is 93. 2%, which is marginally higher than the number for female literacy rate for Oceania, at 92. 7%. On the other hand, the figure for Africa is 62. 5%, which was significantly lower than the figure in Asia, at 79. 3%, while the percentage for male literacy rate in Asia was 14. 3% higher than the percentage for male literacy rate in Africa, at 85. 9% and 71. 6% respectively. The figures for females literacy rate for Asia and Africa were 72. 5% and 53. 9% respectively, a difference of 18. 6%.
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illustrates how the estimated
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by five regions (Africa, Americas, Asia, Europe, Oceania) and gender (male and
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between 2000 and 2004.

Overall
, what stands out from the
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is that, Americas, Europe and Oceania had the highest
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literacy
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, although Asia and Africa had the lowest
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, while World had 82. 2%
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rate.

Looking at the
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, it can be
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that the
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in Europe for both male and
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were the highest
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in the
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, at 99. 2 % and 98. 5%. The proportions for
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in Americas and Oceania were around 94%, whereas the number for
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in Americas is 93. 2%, which is
marginally
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female
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for Oceania, at 92. 7%.

On the other hand
, the
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for Africa is 62. 5%, which was
significantly
lower than the
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in Asia, at 79. 3%, while the percentage for male
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in Asia was 14. 3% higher than the percentage for male
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in Africa, at 85. 9% and 71. 6%
respectively
. The
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for
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females
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for Asia and Africa were 72. 5% and 53. 9%
respectively
, a difference of 18. 6%.

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