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the graph and table represents the average hours and temperature in three cities of new york

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The bar graph represents the average humidity present in the atmosphere throughout the entire month. In contrast, the table illustrates the calculated hour of sunrise over the three different cities in the USA. Generally speaking, cities like New York and London shows similar graph characteristics, where the lowest temperature was recorded in January, and the driest humid atmosphere was recorded in July. In January, the highest temperature in London counted about 26° Celsius and the lowest in July, approximately 16° Celsius; however, the most hours of sunshine can be seen in New York and lowest in London. At the commencement of the month, the temperature in both the cities, London and New York, stayed low, nearly about 5 and 9° Celsius, which started to escalate dramatically to 24 and 30° Celsius, which was recorded in July. However, the average of 2535 hours of sunshine was calculated the most for New York. Correspondingly, at-a least of 1180 hours of sunrise were analyzed in London. Furthermore, the temperature in Sydney remained steady with a slight decrease of 1° to 25° Celsius over the three months; however, a mediocre fall till July up to 16° Celsius, which then rise sharply to 25° Celsius till the end of the year. On a final note of analysis, the average sunrise calculated for Sydney was computed of about 2473 hours.

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IELTS academic the graph and table represents the average hours and temperature in three cities of new york

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