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Fish pie process diagram

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The diagramn gives us the information about the baked food product whescribes the production line of A fish pie making It also is known by the name as process and storage of the pie. The process is divided into two parts First part contain the potat which delives which is imported from the farms Sapto Jone month. After the arrival of the trucks, potatoes are taken to the convier Abelt dith which first of all they are cleaned all the extra Msoil is washed and then next step is. to Pin of the skin of the potatoes and make ready to use. After pilling they are cut into fine pieces. the container which then into boiled at certain temperature, there after they are still go stored for the further uses. 9 and get. . The second process consists of the the Salman fish which is brought to the proce process of -ssing plant in less than 12 hours. When the fish is arrived the process starts in the starting of the process fish get sprinkled with lemon juice and solt after that it get into the stearn oven of certain temperature for given time fofter that the. skin and bones are removed with by the worker and also at the same time it gets inspected, further process contains the microwaveable container which get filled with the peas and sauce and also contain the Salmon and the potatons clices which was prep. ared in the first process. All the ingridents get in one container and set to the freezer for the storage where it get dispatcted according to the requirement orders. Summarised that the processes of frozen fish pie is quit long and time consuming
The
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diagramn
gives us the information about the baked food product
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whescribes
the production line of A fish pie making It
also
is known
by the name as
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process
and storage of the pie.

The
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process
is divided
into two parts
First
part contain the
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potat
which
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delives
which
is imported
from the farms
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Sapto
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Jone
month. After the arrival of the trucks, potatoes
are taken
to the
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convier
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Abelt
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dith
which
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first of all
they
are cleaned
all the extra
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Msoil
is washed
and then
next
step is. to Pin of the skin of the potatoes and
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make
ready to
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use
.
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After
pilling they are
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cut
into fine pieces.
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the
container which then into boiled at certain temperature,
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there after
they are
still
go stored for the
further
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uses
. 9 and
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get
.
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.


The second
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process
consists of
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the the
Salman fish which
is brought
to the
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proce
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process
of
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-ssing
plant in less than 12 hours. When the fish
is arrived
the
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process
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starts
in the starting of the
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process
fish
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get
sprinkled with lemon juice and
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solt
after that it
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get
into the
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stearn
oven of certain temperature for
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given
time
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fofter
that
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the.
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skin
and bones
are removed
with by the worker and
also
at the same time it
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gets
inspected,
further
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process
contains the microwaveable container which
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get
filled with the peas and sauce and
also
contain the Salmon and the
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potatons
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clices
which was prep.
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ared
in the
first
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process
. All the
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ingridents
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get
in one container and set to the freezer for the storage where it
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get
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dispatcted
according to the requirement orders.

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Summarised
that the
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processes
of frozen fish pie
is quit
long and
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time consuming
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IELTS academic Fish pie process diagram

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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