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The table below shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries.

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The table illustrates how different countries spend their money on healthcare annually. Overall, it is evident that Japan spent the most, while Brazil spent the lowest in healthcare in the year 2010. Analyzing the data, it is clear that Asian countries ranked highest, approximately four times more than the global average. People from Japan allocated $2, 690 to healthcare, which was almost $1, 500 more compared to other Asian countries. Furthermore, South Korea and Singapore spent a relatively similar amount on their health, $1, 187 and $1, 035 respectively. The second detail to note is South American countries. They stand the lowest in regards to healthcare expenditure. Even though Argentina topped Chile and Brazil, people from Argentina only contributed $551 to their health. Chile and Brazil both spent less than $500 on healthcare, $473 and $426 respectively. As for Bahrain and Kuwait, they both stood close to the Global average. Bahrain spent $810, whereas Kuwait spent $796.

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