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The table below shows the total length (in kilometers) of High-Speed Rail tracks of China, France, and Japan in 1990, 2010, and projections for 2020.

The table below shows the total length (in kilometers) of High-Speed Rail tracks of China, France, and Japan in 1990, 2010, and projections for 2020. QwBkP
The table compares the total length of railways in three countries namely China, France, and Japan in 1990, 2010, and 2020, and it is measured in kilometers. Overall, it is clear that the length of railways in all of mentioned countries rise during the examined years. Additionally, China’s rail-road’s length was much higher than other countries in 2020. In comparison to other trends, there was a remarkable increase in China’s rail length, and it overtook France and Japan in 2010. Although in 1990 China did not have any rail-roads, by 2020 it owned the longest one among others, peaked at 13, 126 kilometers. Furthermore, France and japan experienced a noticeable rise in their railway length as well. In 1990, japanese had built the longest one, standing at 1, 832, while France with 720 kilometers was on the second place. In 2020, both of these countries reached to a length of higher than 3, 500, which was about 1000 less than that in Japan at the same time.
The table compares the total
length
of railways in three
countries
namely
China, France, and
Japan
in 1990, 2010, and 2020, and it
is measured
in kilometers.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the
length
of railways in all of mentioned
countries
rise during the examined years.
Additionally
, China’s rail-road’s
length
was much higher than other
countries
in 2020.

In comparison
to other trends, there was a remarkable increase in China’s rail
length
, and it overtook France and
Japan
in 2010. Although in 1990 China did not have any rail-roads, by 2020 it
owned
the longest one among others, peaked at 13, 126 kilometers.

Furthermore
, France and
japan
experienced a noticeable rise in their railway
length
as well
. In 1990,
japanese
had built the longest one, standing at 1, 832, while France with 720 kilometers was on the second place. In 2020, both of these
countries
reached to a
length
of higher than 3, 500, which was about 1000 less than that in
Japan
at the same time.
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