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The table below shows the sex ratio across all cities in Australia for two years

The table displays the sex ratio for girls to boys at age group of 0-6 all cities in Australia for a year 2001 and 2011. Overall, it can be seen that sex ratio above 951 in 2001 highest number of cities in Australia while below 915 in 232 cities across the sex ratio. To begin with, in 2001 sex ratio in sharply changes in number of cities which is 162 to 232, it was a maximum number sex ratio for girls to boys. This matter was very bad for young generation. Between 915 and 950 sex ratios in 174 cities part of in this thing change their gender in 2001 which number in increases 201 cities in 2011. Moreover, above 951 lost of people in Australia's cities change gender in 2001 this thing deeply decreases which is 155 cities part of across the sex ratio. And no figures available very few sex ratios in Australia's cities in both years which is 27 and 35 respectively. Lastly, In Australia count cities for across the sex ratio which proportion is 623 that was equaled for both years.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the sex ratio across all cities in Australia for two years

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