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The pie chart below shows the frequency of U S Adults online purchasing habits in 2015 while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make compa v.2

The chart depicts the proportion of an adult who purchased online based on the time preference and different methods in America, in 2015. Overall, the most of the U. S adult shop less common in the internet with major choice of buying things in physical store expect weekly shoppers. Looking more into detail, in 2015 adult who spent less often in shopping online ranked first, which accounted for 37%, whereas weekly purchase become less common with only 15%. Meanwhile, One in five adult shop for few times in a month compared to adult shopper who reject online shopping for 28%. Regarding the bar chart, the highest percentage of adult prefer to buy products retail store, which contain more than 80% by less frequent shopper and all and monthly shopper figured to roughly 60% each. By contrast, weekly shopper had greater choice to buy items in online with above 60%.
The chart depicts the proportion of an adult who
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Meanwhile, One in five adult shop for few times in a month compared to adult
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who reject
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shopping for 28%. Regarding the bar chart, the highest percentage of adult prefer to
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products retail store, which contain more than 80% by
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and all and monthly
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figured to roughly 60% each. By contrast, weekly
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had greater choice to
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the frequency of U S Adults online purchasing habits in 2015 while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferences

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