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The graph below shows the quarterly sales figures for Lovedale bottled beverages in 2019.

The bar chart reveals the quarterly sales for Lovedale bottled beverage during 2019 In the bar chart there are 4 beverages shown inside the graph including apple, orange, guava and pomegranate juice. One of the highest bottles sold is orange juice from quarter 3 in between 30 millions to 35 millions, while the lowest is from all of the bunch is guava juice from quarter 1 in between 5 millions and 10 millions. If we’re focusing on each quarters then it’s obvious that orange juice remained as the highest for all quarters, while apple juice and pomegranate juice are in the middle for all quarters, and guava will remained as the lowest for all 4 quarters. In conclusion, orange juice is doing well, since it’s the highest among all 3 other drinks and it’s also one of the most bottled sold in all 4 quarter. However, the same can’t be said for guava juice, because it received the least bottled sold in all 4 quarters

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because
 it received the least bottled sold in all 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcottagecabindorm
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