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The diagram showa how rain water is collected for the use of drinking water I'm Australian town

The diagram illustrate the collection of rainwater for the purpose of drinking in an Australian town. Overall, The rainwater is collected and drain into a gutter which undergoes different process before it is ready for consumption. Initially, The rain drop on the rooftop and then drain into the gutter and it runs down through a pipe at the aisle of the house. Each house collect water the same way and the rain water passes through the underground pipe to the water filter. The rain water ia been filter to remove any impurities and then it goes through the pipe into the storage tank further into water treatment, to be treated with chemicals in order to make it fit and ready for consumption. When the water is ready for drinking it goes through the pipe back into the houses for people daily consumption.

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 the collection of rainwater for the purpose of drinking in an Australian town.

Overall
, The rainwater is collected
 and drain into a gutter which undergoes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 process This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 it is ready for consumption.

Initially
, The rain drop on the rooftop and then drain into the gutter and it runs down You use this word too often, consider replacing it withover
through
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withventhoseductsewervesselline
pipe
 at the aisle of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Each This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 collect You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 the same way and the rain You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 passes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withover
through
 the underground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withventhoseductsewervesselline
pipe
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 filter.

The rain You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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 been filter to remove any impurities and then it goes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withover
through
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withventhoseductsewervesselline
pipe
 into the storage tank further
 into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 treatment, to be treated
 with chemicals in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it fit and ready for consumption. When the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is ready for drinking it goes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withover
through
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withventhoseductsewervesselline
pipe
 back into the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 daily consumption. 