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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different area in European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph illustrates the number of foreign visitors visit at three different areas like the post come mountains the legs in European countries over two decades 1987 to 2007. Oral post area was most visited by visitors in two decades. in starting point lot of physical area is the lakes. the mountains area was consistently visited by nearly same number of visitors. in 1987 the coast area visited was 40000 and that was highest visited area that time while the lakes had 10, 000 visitors and that was lowest in 1987 in European country. The mountains areas visitor was 12000 in 1987. after that in 1992 the mountains and lakes visitors was approximately 25, 000 travellers while the cost had nearly 33 thousands that was slightly lower than previous years. The cost and lakes visiting rates was increased after that and same in 2000 at 60, 000 visitors. The cost visitors was increased and stop at 75000 visitors in 2007. The legs area visitors are increased 76000 people in 2000 and down that 50000 in 2007 while the mountain visitor was visited by up and down its 35000 visitors in 2007.
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the legs in European countries over two decades 1987 to 2007.

Oral post
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was most
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in two decades.
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1987 the coast
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area
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was 40000 and that was highest
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visited
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that time while the
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lakes
had 10, 000
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visitors
and that was lowest in 1987 in European country. The
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mountains
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was 12000 in 1987.
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was approximately 25, 000
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. The cost
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in 2007.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different area in European country between 1987 and 2007.

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