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The diagram below shows how hydro_electric power is generated

The diagram illustrates the process and production of hydro_electric power. Overall, The rainwater is the main source of production which involves evaporation, reservior, turbine and distribution of electricity to the houses. Initially, Sun causes the evaporation of water from the sea, forming in the cloud when it becomes heavily sense it rain and it is store in the reservoir which is controlled by a dam, the flow of water from the dam is controlled by the value which open and close to allow water to flow to a turbine below. Secondly, The turbine is powered by high voltage cables that is connected to the transformer station. From there the electricity is being sent to houses, school, hospitals through underground cables.
The diagram illustrates the process and production of
In standard English, a word does not contain an underscore character (_). Make sure that the word 'hydro _ electric' is correct.
hydro_electric
power.

Overall
, The rainwater is the main source of production which involves evaporation,
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reservior
, turbine and distribution of electricity to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
.

Initially
, Sun causes the evaporation of water from the sea, forming in the cloud when it becomes
heavily
sense it rain and it is store in the reservoir which
is controlled
by a dam, the flow of water from the dam
is controlled
by the value which open and close to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
water to flow to a turbine below.

Secondly
, The turbine
is powered
by high voltage cables that
is connected
to the transformer station. From there the electricity is being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
, school, hospitals through underground cables.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how hydro_electric power is generated

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