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The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop building on a typical weekday.

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop building on a typical weekday. AEEL
The table compares the proportion of purchased items during a working day in a café. Although coffee by far was the most sold drink, sandwiches could be mentioned as the least favorite eating item of all. It is clear that the number of ordered coffee had increased to 200 by 8: 30 whilst these were half of this number willing to drink tea during the same period of time. The number of the tea that people bought at 2: 30 to 5: 30 was 35 pieces while pastries and coffee were sold 3 times bigger. During 4 hours around the noon requirement for sandwiches climb by its pick which is followed by a negligible require for pastries.
The table compares the proportion of
purchased
items during a working day in a café.

Although coffee by far was the most sold drink, sandwiches could
be mentioned
as the least favorite eating item of all.

It is
clear
that the number of ordered coffee had increased to 200 by 8: 30 whilst these were half of this number willing to drink tea during the same period of time. The number of the tea that
people
bought
at 2: 30 to 5: 30 was 35 pieces while pastries and coffee
were sold
3 times bigger. During 4 hours around the noon requirement for sandwiches climb by its pick which
is followed
by a negligible
require
for pastries.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop building on a typical weekday.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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