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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. mggA
The bar charts show five various industries with percentage in Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 and a forecast for 2029. First of all, looking at 2009 we can notice that finance contain less than a third on the contrary tourism and fossil fuels are exactly same quantitiy with 26%. While manufacturing covers about a fifth part, food processing is 10% and the least part. Secondly, after ten years, there are some variations in some sectors consequently, finance has been increased 6% and still is the biggest part. There is 10% and 5% rise in the percentage of food processing and fossil fuels whilst, manufacturing and tourism has been declined and there is 5% decrease for both of them. Lastly, due to calculating, in 2029 finance will increase 5% and be dominant sector in Brazil’s economy again. A decrease has been estimated in Food and fuel industry so that, both of them will be again the same level which they were in 2009. While it is guessed that there will not be any difference in tourism, the percentage of manufacturing will decline sharply and be 5%.
The bar charts
show
five various industries with percentage in Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 and a forecast for 2029.

First of all
, looking at 2009 we can notice that finance contain less than a third
on the contrary
tourism and fossil fuels are exactly same
quantitiy
with 26%. While manufacturing covers about a fifth part, food processing is 10% and the least part.

Secondly
, after ten years, there are
some
variations in
some
sectors
consequently
, finance has
been increased
6% and
still
is the biggest part. There is 10% and 5% rise in the percentage of food processing and fossil fuels whilst, manufacturing and tourism has
been declined
and there is 5% decrease for both of them.

Lastly
, due to calculating, in 2029 finance will increase 5% and be dominant sector in Brazil’s economy again. A decrease has
been estimated
in Food and fuel industry
so
that, both of them will be again the same level which they were in 2009. While it
is guessed
that there will not be any difference in tourism, the percentage of manufacturing will decline
sharply
and be 5%.

IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

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