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The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. v.3

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. v. 3
The provided table gives data on the sales of a small restaurant for the second week of October month. As is observed from the given presentation, the sales volume of dinner is higher than the lunch sales volume throughout the whole week except Sunday and people spend more money for lunch and dinner to the restaurant on Friday. As is presented in the comparison table, the sale amount of the restaurant in lunch time is around $ 2300 to $ 2600 from Monday to Friday. Their sales volume of dinner for the same days of the week is between $3400 and $4400. But on Saturday and Sunday, a different trend is observed when the sales volume drops compared to other days of the week and this is possibly because of the days off. On Sunday the sales volume of lunch decreases to $ 1, 550 and dinner to $ 2, 450 which are the least amounts they sale in the week. Interestingly the dinner sales volume on Sunday night drops to only $ 2045 which is almost 2 times less than the amount they sell on Friday night. In summary, the restaurant sales more for dinner than the lunch and people tend to eat less in restaurants on Saturday and Sunday.
The provided table gives data on the
sales
of a
small
restaurant
for the second
week
of October month. As
is observed
from the
given
presentation, the
sales
volume
of
dinner
is higher than the lunch
sales
volume
throughout the whole
week
except
Sunday
and
people
spend more money for lunch and
dinner
to the
restaurant
on Friday.

As
is presented
in the comparison table, the
sale
amount of the
restaurant
in
lunch time
is around
$ 2300
to
$ 2600
from Monday to Friday. Their
sales
volume
of
dinner
for the same days of the
week
is between $3400 and $4400.
But
on Saturday and
Sunday
, a
different
trend
is observed
when the
sales
volume
drops compared to other days of the
week
and this is
possibly
because
of the days off. On
Sunday
the
sales
volume
of lunch decreases to
$ 1
, 550 and
dinner
to
$ 2
, 450 which are the least amounts they
sale
in the
week
.
Interestingly
the
dinner
sales
volume
on
Sunday
night drops to
only
$ 2045
which is almost 2 times less than the amount they sell on Friday night.

In summary, the
restaurant
sales
more for
dinner
than the lunch and
people
tend to eat less in
restaurants
on Saturday and
Sunday
.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. v. 3

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
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