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the table below shows the result of surveys in 2005, 2010, and 2015 about McGill university

First of all, I think that the table below shows the result of surveys in 2005, 2010, and 2015 about McGill university. In my opinion the box explains the different types of ratings given by students; about McGill university. in addition, the surveys says about five types of surveys of three different years. firstly, it explains about the teaching quality in 2010 it had less percentage by 72. /. by 2005 it slightly raisin up to 74. /. and more over it has increased to 78. /. in the year 2015
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that the table below
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the result of surveys in 2005, 2010, and 2015 about McGill university. In my opinion the box
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types of ratings
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by students; about McGill university.
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addition, the surveys says about five types of surveys of three
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about the teaching quality in 2010 it had less percentage by 72. /.
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raisin up to 74. /.
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more over it has increased to 78. /.
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IELTS academic the table below shows the result of surveys in 2005, 2010, and 2015 about McGill university

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1 paragraphs
90 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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