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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. The graph states that USA is the highest productive country among all in three different year. Whereas Canada is in the least. China has been significantly growing from the year 1975 to 2005. Which is bad for their environmental health. Germany has declined from year 1990 to 2005. In other hand United Kingdom and Canada are constant during whole three different years. These two countries hasn't crossed more than 200000 metric tonnes. However, India has been dramatically growing since 1975 but it hasn't crossed 400000 metric tonnes. In conclusion by the end of 2005 USA produced the most amount of carbon emission while UK produced the least (1600000 and 200000 thousand metric tonnes respectively).
The bar graph
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the amount of carbon emissions in
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different
countries during three
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different
years.

The graph states that USA is the highest productive country among all in three
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different
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year
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Whereas
Canada is in the least. China has been
significantly
growing from the
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year
1975 to 2005. Which is
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bad
for their environmental health. Germany has declined from
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year
1990 to 2005. In other hand United Kingdom and Canada are constant during whole three
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different
years. These two countries hasn't crossed more than 200000 metric tonnes.
However
, India has been
dramatically
growing since 1975
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but
it hasn't crossed 400000 metric tonnes.

In conclusion
by the
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end
of 2005 USA produced the most amount of carbon emission while UK produced the least (1600000 and 200000 thousand metric tonnes
respectively
).
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IELTS academic The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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