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the chart below gives information about Southland's main expand orts in 2000,*20.., future projection for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph illustrates the Southland's main reports in the year 2000, 2021 and future projections for 2025 in billion. This chart represents the information on international tourism, dairy products, and meat products of the country. We can see that international tourism went up to 8. 1 billion in the year 2000, whereas in the year 2021 it increased to almost 9 billion and in the future 2025 it is expected to be around 10 billion. Meanwhile, the dairy products are around 7 billion in the year 2000. In 2021 it went up to around 10 billion but it is expected to drop down in the year 2025 to 9. 5 billion. Meat products have always been on a low export. So in 2000 meat products were at 6 billion which then decreased in 2021 to 5. 5 billion and again faced a downfall in the future year 2025 to 5 billion.
The bar graph illustrates the Southland's main reports in the
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2000, 2021 and future projections for 2025 in
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. This chart represents the information on international tourism, dairy
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, and meat
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of the country. We can
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that international tourism went up to 8. 1
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in the
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2000, whereas in the
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2021 it increased to almost 9
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and in the future 2025 it is
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to be around 10
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. Meanwhile, the dairy
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are around 7
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in the
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2000. In
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in the
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2025 to 9. 5
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. Meat
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have always been on a low export.
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in 2000 meat
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were at 6
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which then decreased in 2021 to 5. 5
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and again faced a downfall in the future
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IELTS academic the chart below gives information about Southland's main expand orts in 2000, *20. . , future projection for 2025.

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