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the table below shows the result of surveys in 2005, 2010, and 2015 about McGill university

First, I consider that the table below demonstrates the result of surveys in 2005, 2010, and 2015 about McGill university. In my opinion the box interprets the various types of ratings given by students; about McGill university. In addition, the surveys says about five types of surveys of three various years. Firstly, it interprets about the teaching quality in 2010 it had less percentage by 72. /. By 2005 it slightly raisin up to 74. /. And more over it has increased to 78. /. In the year 2015 later on the second the survey library resources maintained its by percentage by quit differences in three years? In 2005, it is 86. /. And later by 2010 and 2015 it raised up to 88. /. And 87. /. The other survey is student services has the highest percentage in 2015 by 95. /. then it fallen to 86. ? /. And 88. /. In the year 2005 And 2010, The lest survey is range of modules offered and it drastically decreased to 25. /. in 2015 while it raised up to 31. /. And 39. /. in 2010 And 2005. the last and final survey is sports nd social facilities maintained equal percentage in all three years by 65. /. in 2005, 2010 And 2015. To sum up, I believe that the survey has many features and comparisons while comparing with each and every year.
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in 2005, 2010, and 2015 about McGill university. In my opinion the box interprets the various types of ratings
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by 72. /. By 2005 it
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2015 later on the second the
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library resources maintained its by
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by quit differences in three years? In 2005, it is 86. /. And later by 2010 and 2015 it raised up to 88. /. And 87. /. The other
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in 2015 by 95. /.
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in all three years by 65. /.
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