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The table below shows the rate at which people saved money, expressed as a percentage of GDP, in seven countries from 1990 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the rate at which people saved money, expressed as a percentage of GDP, in seven countries from 1990 to 2008. Bl8Dd
The table illustrates the speed at which people preserved their money which is shown in the form of percentages of GDP in seven countries over the period of 1990-2008. In 1990 and 2000, Singapore has the highest savings of 43. 6% and 46. 9% of GDP which is then overtook by China with 53. 2% in 2008. The biggest economy the United States continue to be at the bottom in terms of savings for the entire period with the minimum 12. 1% in 2008. The savings declined in South Korea over the period from 37. 7% to 31. 9% whereas it increased in India from 23. 0% to 33. 6%. The GDP dropped down in Germany for the year 2000 from 25. 3% to 20. 2% which then rose to 26% in the year 2008. While in Italy the percentage remained constant from 1990-2000 but went down the hill to 18. 2% in the consecutive years. Overall, China and Singapore are the countries with highest GDP whereas USA has the least percentage of savings.
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in the form of percentages of GDP in seven countries over the period of 1990-2008.

In 1990 and 2000, Singapore has the highest
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savings
of 43. 6% and 46. 9% of GDP which is then overtook by China with 53. 2% in 2008. The biggest economy the United States continue to be at the bottom in terms of
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savings
for the entire period with the minimum 12. 1% in 2008.

The
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savings
declined in South Korea over the period from 37. 7% to 31. 9% whereas it increased in India from 23. 0% to 33. 6%. The GDP
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dropped down
in Germany for the year 2000 from 25. 3% to 20. 2% which then rose to 26% in the year 2008. While in Italy the percentage remained constant from 1990-2000
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went down the hill to 18. 2% in the consecutive years.

Overall
, China and Singapore are the countries with
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GDP whereas USA has the least percentage of
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IELTS academic The table below shows the rate at which people saved money, expressed as a percentage of GDP, in seven countries from 1990 to 2008.

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