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The given line graph illustrates the yearly spending pattern of cell phones and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010 in the US.

The given line graph illustrates the yearly spending pattern of cell phones and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010 in the US. 8aBpw
The given line graph illustrates the yearly spending pattern of cell phones and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010 in the US. Overall, it can be observed that the popularity of the cell phone services increased while, residential phone services showed a downward trend during the stipulated period. In 2001 the outlay of cell phone services was around 200 whereas, it was around $700 for the residential phone services. Then after five years cell phones uses rosed to almost $500 as well as landline services dropped it to nearly $650. But interestingly after in 2006 both these services reached at $550. However after that, both these services showed a upward and downward trend. At the end of the year these figures for disbursement of phone services in United States went up dramatically to near $800 for residential services while in terms of mobile services it dropped nearly $450.
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and
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from 2001 to 2010 in the US.

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be observed
that the popularity of the
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cell
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phone
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services
increased while,
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residential
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phone
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services
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showed
a downward trend during the stipulated period.

In 2001 the outlay of
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cell
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phone
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services
was around 200 whereas, it was around $700 for the
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residential
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phone
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services
. Then after five years
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cell
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phones
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to almost $500
as well
as landline
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dropped it to
nearly
$650.
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But
interestingly
after in 2006 both these
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services
reached at $550.

However
after that, both these
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services
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showed
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upward and downward trend. At the
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end
of the year these figures for disbursement of
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went up
dramatically
to near $800 for
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while in terms of mobile
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it dropped
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$450.

IELTS academic The given line graph illustrates the yearly spending pattern of cell phones and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010 in the US.

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