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The diagram shows the changes in the village park.

The diagram shows the changes in the village park. PgbBB

The diagram illustrates the differences in about 10 years ago and at present of the village park. To begin with, the park was surrounded by compound walls on all four sides, to the north direction the main entrance was provided for the people. Moving to the northwest region there was a car parking area where 20 cars can accommodate. On the main north side, there was a tennis court, while to the opposite football pitch was occupied. To the Northeast children, a play area was made, and to the southeast ponds, wood was reconstructed. Now to the at the present village park area have some changes the main boundaries covered with a cycle path. The total capacity of the car parking has increased the tennis court size is enlarged as well as the children play area is divided into the recreational side. The additional facilities are provided for people to the northeast toilet, while to the southeast boat and cafe, picnic ground to the southeast is renovated. Overall, the village park area is the same but many things have been added and the functionality of the diagram has been improved.

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park
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begin
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park
was surrounded
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people
. Moving to the northwest region there was a car parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 where 20 cars can accommodate. On the main north side, there was a tennis court, while to the opposite football pitch was occupied
. To the Northeast children, a play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
was made
, and to the southeast ponds, wood was reconstructed
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 to the at the present village You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
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area
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some
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changes
 the main boundaries covered with a cycle path. The total capacity of the car parking has increased the tennis court size is enlarged
as well
 as the children play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
is divided
 into the recreational side. The additional facilities are provided
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to the northeast toilet, while to the southeast boat and 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
, picnic ground to the southeast is renovated
. Overall
, the village You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
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but
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many
 things have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 and the functionality of the diagram has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
. 