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contributions by British people of different ages in the years 1990 and 2010.

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The graph represents the levels of donation contributions by British people of different ages in the years 1990 and 2010. Overall, there was a decline in donation in 2010 as compared to 1990 except for the people who were over 50 years old. It is worth noticing that, elder people donated more for charity than their younger counterparts. In 1990, 42% British between the age of 36 and 50 donated to charity which was the highest amongst all in the chart. In contrast, people between 18-25 age group contributed only about 17% which was the lowest. After two decades, these figures had fallen significantly to 35% and 7% respectively. While donations up to age of 50 declined across the two years, they rose among the 51-65 age-group from 35% to nearly 40% which was the highest percentage for 2010. The figure for the over 65s was lower than this, at 35% but it was still a little higher than the 1990’s figure of 32%.

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