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The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998. Bkp6
The table shows the information about cacao beans from 1992 to 1998. Overall, is clear usa produced highest than all other nations. But in 1996to 98 india production is high than all. According to statement, 1 lack tons beans produced by usa and india production is 90000 tons. All other countries produce half than usa and india. In north america, it started at 46000tons in 1992. while in England the production was 29000 in 1992. the production varied in all years.
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the information about cacao beans from 1992 to 1998.
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in 1996to 98
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india
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high
than all. According to statement, 1 lack tons beans produced by
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usa
and
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india
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production
is 90000 tons. All other countries produce half than
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usa
and
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india
. In
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north america
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started
at 46000tons in 1992.
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while
in England the
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was 29000 in 1992.
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the
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varied in all years.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998.

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