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The pie chart shows the information about the favorite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B.

The pie chart shows the information about the favorite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B. Mp1L
The information about the number of students out of 60 who choose five subjects as best loved subjects: social science, science, language, craft or drawing and sport from two schools; school A and school B, is illustrated by the assigned pie chart. Overall, it can be explicitly observed that learners gave more priority to sports subject from school A; however, the less popular subject in school A was social science. It is noticeable that the biggest discrepancy can be seen in drawing subject in school A and school B. To begin with, a very low count of educatees gave preference to science section, as the figure was 9 in school A and 2 in school B. There were 10 tutees from school B, who choose favourite subject as social science, whereas, from school A, only just 6 pupils showed interest in social science. 18 trainees' subject language was more interesting in school B than school A students who were just 5 learners. Moving further, only 4 pupils revealed their interest in craft or drawing from school A, from education center B, tutees preferred 21 more students than school A. A huge discrepancy can be witnessed in case of sports, as educatees' more loving subject was sports in school A which was 36 pupils. In school B, little number of learners' favourite subject was sports, was 5 students only.
The information about the number of
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students
out of 60 who choose five
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subjects
as best
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loved
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subjects
:
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social
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science
,
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science
, language, craft or drawing and
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sport
from two
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schools
;
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school
A and
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school
B,
is illustrated
by the assigned pie chart.

Overall
, it can be
explicitly
observed that learners gave more priority to
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sports
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subject
from
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school
A;
however
, the less popular
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subject
in
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school
A was
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social
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science
. It is noticeable that the biggest discrepancy can be
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seen
in drawing
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subject
in
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school
A and
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school
B.

To
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begin
with, a
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very
low count of
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educatees
gave preference to
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science
section, as the figure was 9 in
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school
A and 2 in
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school
B. There were 10
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tutees
from
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school
B, who choose
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favourite
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subject
as
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social
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science
, whereas, from
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school
A,
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only
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just
6 pupils
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showed
interest in
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social
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science
. 18 trainees'
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subject
language was more interesting in
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school
B than
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school
A
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students
who were
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just
5 learners.

Moving
further
,
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only
4 pupils revealed their interest in craft or drawing from
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school
A, from education center B,
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tutees
preferred 21 more
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students
than
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school
A. A huge discrepancy can
be witnessed
in case of
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sports
, as
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educatees
' more loving
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subject
was
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sports
in
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school
A which was 36 pupils. In
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school
B,
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little
number of learners'
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favourite
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subject
was
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sports
, was 5
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students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
.
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the information about the favorite subjects of 60 students from two schools, school A and school B.

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4 paragraphs
228 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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