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The diagram of how solar power water pump works

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The diagram shows the working process of solar power and how it pump water for works. Overall, the glace at diagram reveal that sun heat reflect on solar panel and through its direct current from panel to ground and provide enough water for village. . In addition, the process of Solar power work when rays of sun come in a contract with solar panel and the photovaltaic cells absorb power and supply through panel with dc power. Furthermore, ground level water pumped up with a help of bore pump which is in underground well jump to water tank and when tank fill up completly then it releases water to village for their needs.
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power
and how it
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pump
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for works.
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, the
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at diagram reveal that sun heat reflect on
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solar
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panel
and through its direct
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current
from
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panel
to ground and provide
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enough
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water
for village.
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Solar
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power
work when rays of sun
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come
in a contract with
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solar
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panel
and the
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photovaltaic
cells absorb
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power
and supply through
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panel
with dc
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power
.
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, ground level
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water
pumped up with a
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of bore pump which is in underground well jump to
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water
tank and when tank fill up
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completly
then it releases
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water
to village for their needs.
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IELTS academic The diagram of how solar power water pump works

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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