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The image describes the working of the water pump powered by the energy obtained from the sun. Process of extracting water from the underground bore or well starts by collecting solar energy from the sun. The massive heat or energy generated from the sun gets stored using solar panel. It consists of photovoltaic cells which consumes the solar energy and converts it into direct current. The pole withstanding solar panel is dug below the ground level and the panel facing the sun. The DC power generated from the panel is linked to the bore pump located inside the underground bore or well. Water level in the well is higher than the bore pump. The current attached with the bore pump allows water to pump out and stored it into the water tank through a pipe. This water tank delivers water to the whole village. Overall, it can be seen that the whole process of working of water pump with the help of solar energy takes mainly three steps, first one is to generate DC power through solar panel then, pumping out the water from the bore or well storing it into the water tank and then supplying the water to the whole village.
The image
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describes
the working of the
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water
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pump
powered by the
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energy
obtained from the sun.

Process of extracting
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water
from the underground
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bore
or
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well
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starts
by collecting
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solar
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energy
from the sun. The massive heat or
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energy
generated from the sun
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gets
stored using
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solar
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panel
. It consists of photovoltaic cells which consumes the
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solar
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energy
and converts it into direct
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current
. The pole withstanding
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solar
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panel
is dug
below the ground level and the
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panel
facing the sun.

The DC power generated from the
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panel
is linked
to the
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bore
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pump
located inside the underground
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bore
or
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well
.
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Water
level in the
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well
is higher than the
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bore
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pump
. The
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current
attached with the
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bore
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pump
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allows
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water
to
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pump
out and stored it into the
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water
tank through a pipe. This
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water
tank delivers
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water
to the whole village.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the whole process of working of
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water
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pump
with the
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help
of
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solar
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energy
takes
mainly
three steps,
first
one is to generate DC power through
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solar
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panel
then, pumping out the
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water
from the
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bore
or
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well
storing it into the
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water
tank and then supplying the
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water
to the whole village.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how a Solar water pump works

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6.5
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