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The two maps shows the changes in layout of a university sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment.

The two maps shows the changes in layout of a university sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment. 9y8n
The map illustrates the information about the changes in the layout of a university sports centre in the present and future after proper redevelopment. It is vivid that, there are outdoor courts are situated western and eastern side of the map is present. In the centre, the 25m pool is developed for extra activities. Thereafter, the gym is built on the northern side of the map. There are someplace for seating and changing room near the pool at present. The reception is made on the south side of the map. Probing further, there will various changes occur in the map in future in University sports centre. The leisure pool and changing room will new developing in the west area of the map, whereas the sports shop are built just near to changing room. After that, a new dance studio is manufactured at the side of the east in a future map. There will also a changing room on the lowest part of the eastern side of the map as well as the cafe will just be located behind the changing room on a future map. Overall, it is clearly seen that, there are some other new facilities are provided for people such as dance studio, leisure pool, changing room, sports shop and cafe in a future map.
The
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map
illustrates the information about the
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changes
in the layout of a university
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sports
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centre
in the present and
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future
after proper redevelopment.

It is vivid that, there are outdoor courts
are situated
western and eastern side of the
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map
is present. In the
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centre
, the
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25m
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pool
is developed
for extra activities. Thereafter, the gym
is built
on the northern side of the
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map
. There are someplace for seating and
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changing
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room
near the
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pool
at present. The reception
is made
on the south side of the map.

Probing
further
, there will various
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changes
occur in the
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map
in
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future
in University
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sports
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centre
. The leisure
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pool
and
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changing
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room
will new developing in the west area of the
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map
, whereas the
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sports
shop
are built
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just
near to
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changing
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room
. After that, a new dance studio
is manufactured
at the side of the east in a
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future
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map
. There will
also
a
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changing
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room
on the lowest part of the eastern side of the
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map
as well
as the
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cafe
will
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just
be located
behind the
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changing
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room
on a
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future
map.

Overall
, it is
clearly
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seen
that, there are
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some
other new facilities
are provided
for
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people
such as dance studio, leisure
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pool
,
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changing
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room
,
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sports
shop and
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cafe
in a
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future
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map
.
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IELTS academic The two maps shows the changes in layout of a university sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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