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The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. XRxN
The pie charts present the distributions of females and males between manual and non-manual jobs in Great Britain in 1992. Overall, more than half of total females concentrated around non-manual labor, while the opposite occurred for males. A total of 69% of women worked in non-manual jobs with 29% focusing on managerial and professional positions, 31%, the most out of all the other sectors, on clerical or related and 9% on other non-manual jobs. The majority of women working manual jobs shifted away from crafting and general labour, since 29% conducted other kinds of manual activities. On the other hand, 52% of men worked manual jobs, with 26% employed in other manual jobs, 24% in craft and similar and 2%, the smallest sector, being general labourers. However, managerial and professional positions were the most frequent options for men, given that they absorbed 36% of males surveyed, the highest sector. Clerical or related and other non-manual jobs employed 6% of men respectively, being the second least popular jobs for men, but still more popular than general labourers.
The pie charts present the distributions of females and males between manual and non-manual
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jobs
in Great Britain in 1992.

Overall
, more than half of total females concentrated around non-manual labor, while the opposite occurred for males.

A total of 69% of women worked in non-manual
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jobs
with 29% focusing on managerial and professional positions, 31%, the most out of all the
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other
sectors, on clerical or related and 9% on
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other
non-manual
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jobs
. The majority of women working manual
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jobs
shifted away from crafting and general
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labour
, since 29% conducted
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other
kinds of manual activities.

On the
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hand, 52% of
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men
worked manual
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jobs
, with 26% employed in
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other
manual
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jobs
, 24% in craft and similar and 2%, the smallest sector, being general
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labourers
.

However
, managerial and professional positions were the most frequent options for
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men
,
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that they absorbed 36% of males surveyed, the highest sector. Clerical or related and
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other
non-manual
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jobs
employed 6% of
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men
respectively
, being the second least popular
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for
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,
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still
more popular than general
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labourers
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IELTS academic The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

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