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the changes of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010

the changes of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010 ELkkx
The two given maps below illustrate the development that occurred in the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. In general, the area witnessed significant changes with numerous farmlands disappearing and serveral residential areas mushrooming. It is clearly seen that in 1930, Stokeford which lies on the easte side of the River Stoke, was surrounded by farmland. By 2010, however, the agricultural land had been transformed into residential dwellings with new access roads. The shops that stood on the single road were removed and replaced by more houses were built in 2010, although the post office still remained. In addition, the primary school also had been enlarged to cater for the rising population. Another noticeable feature of Stokeford in 1930 was a sizeale area of gardens to the south of the town, which also featured a large estate home. Nevertheless, eight decades later, this area had been converted into a retirement home, including extensions to the original house.
The two
given
maps below illustrate the development that occurred in the village of
Stokeford
in 1930 and 2010.

In general
, the
area
witnessed significant
changes
with numerous farmlands disappearing and
serveral
residential
areas
mushrooming.

It is
clearly
seen
that in 1930,
Stokeford
which lies on the
easte
side of the River Stoke,
was surrounded
by farmland. By 2010,
however
, the agricultural land had
been transformed
into residential dwellings with new access roads. The shops that stood on the single road
were removed
and replaced by more
houses
were built
in 2010, although the post office
still
remained.
In addition
, the primary school
also
had
been enlarged
to cater for the rising population.

Another noticeable feature of
Stokeford
in 1930 was a
sizeale
area
of gardens to the south of the town, which
also
featured a large estate home.
Nevertheless
, eight decades later, this
area
had
been converted
into a retirement home, including extensions to the original
house
.
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