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My strategy for my first year of college

My strategy for my first year of college ndggl
Studying abroad by oneself for international student is hard. Many students dream of doing this. I am one of them. The difficulties start from entrance examination to living in college. After passing the entrance exam, what we have to face is getting ready for college. We should have the strategy for studying in college to know what to do when it starts. I want to attend Pittsburgh State University. It is a public university that located in Kansas, United States. This university known for a good education system. I have two plans for my first year of college. First, I will have foreigner friends. I think talking with foreigner will make me become familiar with English conversation. Another reason is to study in a very understandable way, I should have a lot of vocabulary. I will never understand all of the subject matters if I cannot know the meaning of the word clearly. I should upgrade my English skills while studying in this college. Next, I will have much information about American culture for the reason that I can get along well with my foreign friends. I am excited in American education. I think this country has many differences in their education system from Thailand, the country I am from. I hope I can learn a lot from them. In my opinion, I think that the most important purpose for studying abroad is meeting new people from different countries and knowing different culture. I hope I can reach all of my strategies and have good experiences from studying abroad.
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Studying
abroad by oneself for international student is
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hard
.
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Many
students dream of doing this. I am one of them. The difficulties
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
from entrance examination to living in college. After passing the entrance exam, what we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
face is getting ready for college. We should have the strategy for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
in college to know what to do when it
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starts
.

I want to attend Pittsburgh State University. It is a public university that located in Kansas, United States. This university known for a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
education system. I have two plans for my
first
year of college.
First
, I will have foreigner friends. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
talking with foreigner will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me become familiar with English conversation. Another reason is to study in a
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very
understandable way, I should have
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a lot of
vocabulary. I will never understand
Consider using "all the".
all of the
subject matters if I cannot know the meaning of the word
clearly
. I should upgrade my English
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skills
while
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studying
in this college.

Next
, I will have much information about American culture for the reason that I can
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get
along well with my foreign friends. I
am excited
in American education. I
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think
this country has
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many
differences in their education system from Thailand, the country I am from.
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I
hope I can learn a lot from them.

In my opinion, I
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think
that the most
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important
purpose for
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studying
abroad is meeting new
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people
from
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different
countries and knowing
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different
culture.

I hope I can reach all of my strategies and have
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good
experiences from
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studying
abroad.
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IELTS academic My strategy for my first year of college

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