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The table below shows the percentages of homeschooled students in some countries from 1999 to 2004.

The table below shows the percentages of homeschooled students in some countries from 1999 to 2004. BMaGa
The table depicts the percentage of self-educated scholars in various nations from 1999 to 2004. Overall, it can be seen that statistically, there were variations in the enrolments of homeschooled students over the five years. At the beginning of the period, kindergarten had the most self- instructed pupils with 2. 4%. This later increased from 2001 to 2004 with 2. 6% to 2. 9% respectively. Grade 7-8 had 1. 6% self-educated students though, there was a rise from 2002 to 2. 4% to 2. 5% in 2004. In 1999, grades 1-2 had the lowest homeschooled students at 1. 5% with some variations but later increased to 2. 1% after four years. Grades 5-6 had 1. 5% by 1999 but rose with some variations to 2. 2% to 2. 5% in 2002 to 2004.
The table depicts the percentage of self-educated scholars in various nations from 1999 to 2004.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that
statistically
, there were variations in the
enrolments
of homeschooled students over the five years.

At the beginning of the period, kindergarten had the most self- instructed pupils with 2. 4%. This later increased from 2001 to 2004 with 2. 6% to 2. 9%
respectively
. Grade 7-8 had 1. 6% self-educated students though, there was a rise from 2002 to 2. 4% to 2. 5% in 2004.

In 1999, grades 1-2 had the lowest homeschooled students at 1. 5% with
some
variations
but
later increased to 2. 1% after four years. Grades 5-6 had 1. 5% by 1999
but
rose with
some
variations to 2. 2% to 2. 5% in 2002 to 2004.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentages of homeschooled students in some countries from 1999 to 2004.

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