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The diagrams below show stages in the development of the camera since its invention in 1839. Write a short paragraph of 4-5 sentences to compare and contrast the different models to show the development of the camera over the years.

The diagrams below show stages in the development of the camera since its invention in 1839. Write a short paragraph of 4-5 sentences to compare and contrast the different models to show the development of the camera over the years. 8Qxxl
The picture illustrates the process of the camera since it was invented in 1839 until the year 2000. Overall, there are four main steps in the process about how this device developed, beginning with the first camera model and ending at the fully - function digital camera model. In the first stage of the process, the earliest gadget, the Daguerrotype, was invented in 1839, this camera was made of wood and had 36 centimeters in length and consisted of three box - shaped parts. Moreover, it also had a brass lens at the front. In the next step, almost fifty year later, the Kodak No. 1 appeared. The cube - shaped model was reduced half the size of the box - shaped one. In addition, instead of wood, this camera was made of other material which is metal. After that, in 1925, the Leica 1 was renown for several different characteristics. It was much narrower than its predecessor, and furthermore, it brought numerous function buttons along the top. The process concludes with the digital camera, which was introduced in 2000. This device used plastic and was only a fraction of the size of the first camera. In addition, it also had more outstanding features such as zoom lens and can access to the Internet than all of the previous models.
The picture illustrates the
process
of the
camera
since it
was invented
in 1839 until the year 2000.

Overall
, there are four main steps in the
process
about how this device developed, beginning with the
first
camera
model and ending at the
fully
-
function digital
camera
model.

In the
first
stage of the
process
, the earliest gadget, the
Daguerrotype
,
was invented
in 1839, this
camera
was made
of wood and had 36 centimeters in length and consisted of three box
-
shaped parts.
Moreover
, it
also
had a brass lens at the front.

In the
next
step, almost fifty year later, the Kodak No. 1 appeared. The cube
-
shaped model was
reduced
half the size of the box
-
shaped one.
In addition
,
instead
of wood, this
camera
was made
of other material which is metal.

After that, in 1925, the
Leica
1 was renown for several
different
characteristics. It was much narrower than its predecessor, and
furthermore
, it brought numerous function buttons along the top.

The
process
concludes with the digital
camera
, which
was introduced
in 2000. This device
used
plastic and was
only
a fraction of the size of the
first
camera
.
In addition
, it
also
had more outstanding features such as zoom lens and can access to the Internet than
all of the
previous models.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show stages in the development of the camera since its invention in 1839. Write a short paragraph of 4-5 sentences to compare and contrast the different models to show the development of the camera over the years.

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