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The line graph and table shows by a different sector from 1990 and 2000.

The line graph and table shows by a different sector from 1990 and 2000. dqkeP
The line graph and table depicts the information about water utilise by agriculture, industrial, domestic sector in km3 from 1900 to 2000. And table manifest Brazil and Congo utilize water by population, irrigation land and total per person water were consumped in 2000. Taking a closer look, agriculture sector plethora of water than other sector increasing tread were followed by all the sector. And Brazil population consume water alot. Taking a closer look, beginning of 19th centuries industral, domestic sector not utilize any water therefore agriculture sector consume approximately 5000 km 3 water. After five decades huge rose discern among agriculture which were 1000 similar. Goes over 2000. Industrial sector manifest 3 times less than agriculture use. And for domestic purpose were use just 400 km 3. Coming towards table, Brazil population consumed 176 million over 26, 500 km2 into Irrigated land and totally consumed by a single people were 359 m3. Moreover, democratic republic of Congo manifest 100km 2 over irrigated area and 5. 2 million by inhabitants and all over 80 m 3 a person. To sum up, domestic sector always consume less water. Democractic Rublic of Congo were showed less consumer over Brazil.
The line graph and table depicts the information about
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agriculture
, industrial,
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domestic
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sector
in km3 from 1900 to 2000. And table manifest Brazil and Congo
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utilize
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water
by population, irrigation land and total per person
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water
were
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consumped
in 2000.

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agriculture
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sector
plethora of
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than other
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increasing tread
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by all the
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. And Brazil population consume
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alot
. Taking a closer look, beginning of 19th centuries
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industral
,
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not
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any
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therefore
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consume approximately 5000 km 3
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.
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five decades huge rose discern among
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which were 1000 similar. Goes
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2000. Industrial
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manifest 3 times less than
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purpose
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400 km 3. Coming towards table, Brazil population consumed 176 million
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26, 500 km2 into Irrigated land and
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consumed by a single
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were 359 m3.
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, democratic republic of Congo manifest
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100km
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irrigated area and 5. 2 million by inhabitants and all
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over
80 m 3 a person.

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always consume less
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.
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of Congo were
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